Marcomatic's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Western theme #1]

Overall it's a nice composition. However, I think the text needs to look more readable. Try outlining it or correcting a few stray pixels.

UltimoGames responds:

I see what you mean, flashy crazy letters in pixel art is usually not a great idea.. Readability>style

[Luke vs Vader (adventure time edition)]

Amazing fluid movements. Don't listen to the previous commenter, I think this looks amazing.

TheUnseriousguy responds:

well the previous commenter said he liked it, so maybe that comment was deleted, but thanks :D

[Zewdimari Blargacy]

A unique homage to a wonderful game.

BLARGEN69 responds:

It's one of my absolute favorite and most cherished series, I've tried making fan-art of it for years but never was happy with the results. I'm glad this finally happened! Thank you for the comment!

[Attack on Titan]

The anatomical study of the Titan's foot look a bit bizarre in this shot. But overall it's an ok composition.

Djoresh responds:

I agree, I didn't even look up reference but tried to make it just from memory.

The shading is also off in my opinion. There are several things wrong with this piece, and I agree the foot is literally the biggest.

I learned allot from making this piece, but my flaws are still shining trough.

Thank you for your review

[Paintball girl]

Something is odd about the placement of that left arm. It doesn't seem to correctly capture the motion in this piece. But it's a nice attempt.

Djoresh responds:

You mean the side which crushes the orb, right?

I couldn't really find reference material so I guessed a little. Appart from the paint splashing out of her hand there is no other motion going on.

I suppose that it seems odd because of the the shading. But I believe also because the shoulders are exactly the same hight, while her right shoulder should have been higher. or maybe I am showing to much of the lower arm.

Yes I can see what I did wrong now, the wrist is making a really weird twist to get into that position. Thank you for pointing this out.

[Nocturnal Hippo]

I like it. And I like the raw feel of it too

Kabalist responds:

Thanks!

//Kabalist.

[°°Merry Illuminatimas°°]

Cute and quirky. You have my sword.. and my bow..

Whirlguy responds:

...No axe? )':

[Solar Striker - ESP]

So this was made in a 3d software program or? Rendering with AO ? Anti aliasing in mind?

mematron responds:

Check this out for a better idea http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/mematron/solar-striker-pilot

[always watching]

You posted this rendition twice. But that's ok. One understands why.. It's not bad.. Although the linework is a bit jagged and odd.. It's nice though

rockerkid58 responds:

Whoops. yeah, it didn't show I posted it the first time. But thanks! it was just a little something I threw together the other day.