Marcomatic's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Labyrinth's Treasure]

It's a nice composition. However, I'd try using solid tones of colours next time rather than using linear gradients to colour characters. It's very flashy.

coltybah responds:

Thank you for the constructive criticism, it has made me think about my methods for coloring ;D

[Maes Hughes]

I feel like im blinded by the overshine you've got going on in certain places. Overall it's a nice drawing. I'd steer clear of anime and try a more unique style, but overall nice work.

Kayllum responds:

Sorry i have a habit of overusing the Lumi + Shade effect XD Thank you ^_^

[The farmboy who wanted to become a barbarian]

It's a fair attempt. I'd add a subtle background or some shadow to make him pop out a little more.

miliade responds:

Yeah, I could have done some shadows on the ground... I was just too lasy for a background though -_-'

[Harley]

There's something contorted about the face and the hair may require some more work.

GranPapi responds:

Yup, there is something that disturbs me, I need to improve my skin painting skills, This was a whole new challenge for me, and hair too!

[End of Days]

Overall, I like the action and capture of motion in this piece. The rendering, however looks a bit flashy and shiny and I think there needs a bit more work required on lighting. More darker tones would really add depth to this piece.

Sealtale responds:

Thanks for your comment, next time I'm going to work for that.

[The trial]

Very 'Metropolis' Like if you've seen the movie. Nice composition and setting.

cocolongo responds:

wow. thank you so very much for that gigantic comparison.

[Techno Folly Dop]

Overall it's a nice composition. Although the shading of the characters is a bit odd and I'm not sure the font suits the overall piece. Might suggesting adding some extra effects to the text and a different colour? Good work though.

MackleNG responds:

thanks for the feedback bb, i'll work on that

[E-mo and other popular Manga characters take a picture]

Might be more suitable to creating unique subject matter rather than mere copies of characters we already see out there. Be different.

msg2007 responds:

what are you talking about stop hating, and if you would have read before you review my work, the main guy in the picture is my own created character..... I dont even know why I responded to your comment

["As Dementia Takes Away"]

Interesting composition. Not particularly my favourite style, but a fair effort nonetheless

Arvstar responds:

i thought i recognized the name. i enjoy your art sir. thank you for checking out mine.

[New Zelda Item!]

It's a fair attempt. I think you can do much better, though.

Plasmarift responds:

Perhaps, though I wish I knew how I could.